Timberpaw
Apprentice
these places and these faces are getting old, so i'm going home;;
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Post by Timberpaw on Sept 17, 2009 19:15:19 GMT -5
Name and previous names: Blizzardkit, Blizzardpaw, Blizzardstorm
Gender: Tom
Clan: Thorn
Ranking: Deputy (apprentice- Greenpaw)
Age in moons: 23 moons
Physical description: Blizzardstorm is a pure white, long-limbed cat with dull grey eyes, but isn't blind. He has a pitch black, shining streak that goes up his nose and stops in between his eyes. His paws are gentle adn ebony, his tail his black-tipped and thin. His chest his wide. His shoulders are powerful, and his head is normal-sized for a cat. He has no other dot on his ivory hued pelt. So he is a Siamese cat.
Mental description: Blizzardstorm is kind to all, but commanding. He can become rude if the younger warriors don't do what they are told. He can joke around with them at times, but is mostly wise. He listens to his leader well. He is tender-hearted. In battle he is fierce, but doesn't break the warrior code by killing his enemies, much as he hates them. He is curious about other cats and wishes to learn more about them.
Personal history: Blizzardstorm was born in ThornClan and trained to be a good cat. He was the most wise out of his litter from birth, and never played the pointless kit games. His mother was a white cat called Songfeather, and his father was a dark tabby called Darktalon. His brother was called Leechbite, a handsome, sleek black tom with piercing green eyes. His sister was called Goldenshine, a Siamese cat like himself.
His brother ran away to be a rogue shortly after they were named warriors for some odd reason. His sister fought to her death with a rogue cat, and saved Blizzardstorm's life. His mother and father grew frail and old, and soon died when he was 17 moons old, but he learned to forget. He just knew that he wanted to be a good senior warrior, and maybe soon be deputy, but a good one where cats could look up to and admire.
He had one son when he was fairly young, with a black she-cat called Nightheart. She died later, when Ivorykit was only one moon old. He was called Ivorykit at birth, but when he became an apprentice, he had Siamese markings like Blizzardstorm. The leader called him Singedpaw. Blizzardstorm could tell that his son was happy at his new name.
Places role-played in: N/A
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Post by me on Sept 17, 2009 20:25:37 GMT -5
Not accepted. Problems:
ThornClan cats are all either tabby or abyssinian-colored, with the occasional calico and even more rare Siamese.
Also, male cats cannot be calico colored.
It looks pretty good otherwise =)
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Timberpaw
Apprentice
these places and these faces are getting old, so i'm going home;;
Posts: 92
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Post by Timberpaw on Sept 17, 2009 21:01:01 GMT -5
Fixed. c:
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Post by me on Sept 17, 2009 22:32:28 GMT -5
Accepted. ^^ Is it okay if he's Singedpaw's dad? ((if yes, don't forget to add that to his history))
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