Winterfrost
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Post by Winterfrost on Aug 21, 2009 16:19:00 GMT -5
Name and previous names: Arctickit, Arcticpaw, Arcticfire
Gender: Female
Clan: ThornClan
Ranking: Warrior (apprentice – Timberpaw)
Age in moons: 17 moons
Physical description: Arcticfire is a full-grown calico she-cat. She has sleek, well-groomed, and short-haired fur. Her fur is mainly white with black and amber-orange coloured patches along her back, tail, and face. The patches on her back are random but the tip of her tail is black. Her face is split in half with the colours: the left side being black and the right half being orange. A little splotch of orange is painted on the left side of her muzzle. She has no stripes whatsoever in the patches of colours: they’re pure amber-orange and black. Her whiskers are white, like the fur in her ears. Her nose is a light pink like her paw pads. Her tail is thin, the fur short and length short as well. Although she’s a she-cat, she’s tall for her age and gender, her legs lanky yet thick with muscles. She’s not the best fighter because her muscles are the long and stretched kind used for running and speed, which makes her a very good hunter. Her eyes are hazel, a mixture of brown and green, and large.
Mental description: Arcticfire is shy, soft-spoken, quiet, and innocent. She doesn’t like to talk much; instead she prefers to be on the fringe of the crowd and not asking questions. She is very humble and doesn’t think she can do much of anything except hunting. She strives not to be in the center of attention, being as reserved and anti-social as she is. She does what she is told to do, when she’d told to do it, without asking any questions. She’s not very talkative; actually she really hates to have to hear her own voice. She’s tense, self-conscience, jumpy, and nervous. Whenever someone so much as speaks her name, she jumps like a badger had been breathing down her neck. She’s not a very strong warrior and she knows it and that makes her feel like she isn’t important. But she is a good hunter, one of the best in her Clan. But although she’s not very nervous, shy, and is usually found sitting or hunting alone, she loves all of her Clanmates dearly and would do anything to save them from death. Especially Timberpaw, who, like her leader had thought, is about the only cat that she talks to on a daily basis. Out of all the cats in her Clan, she is more protective over him, because of his one blind eye.
Personal history: Born into ThornClan, Arctickit had two brothers, herself being the only female. Her brothers’ names were Ivykit and Whitekit. She never knew her mother, who had died of a sickness after giving birth to her and her brothers. She was cared for by another she-cat in the nursery, but her father often came to visit them, so she knew she was at least loved by one of her parents. It wasn’t until she became an apprentice did she realized that her father might not even love her. Her brothers were excellent fighters but Arcticpaw wasn’t so good when it came to fighting, much to her father’s frustration. Although Arcticpaw’s mentor was a senior warrior and one of the best fighters, her father believed that is was her mentor’s fault that she was no good at fighting. Hunting was something she was good at, but her father wanted his kits to be strong fighters, not hunters. To Arcticpaw, she thought he was being silly. Hunters were what kept the Clan feed, after all. But her father didn’t see it that way. He kept striving to make her as good as her brothers, even going so far as to invade her training sessions with her mentor. Finally Arcticpaw came to realize that her father would only love her if she was a good fighter, something that she knew she could never be. Oh, she was decent, just not excellent, and decent wasn’t enough for her dad. So she gave up on trying proving to him, instead just concentrating on hunting for her Clan. Then a battle broke out between ThornClan and GaleClan over Breezelan’s territory, Arcticpaw, her brothers, her father, her Clanmates were all sent into battle. During the battle, her father, Ivypaw, and Whitepaw died, leaving Arcticpaw all alone. She didn’t let the deaths of her family get to her though because she still had her other Clanmates for comfort. That night after the battle, she was made into a warrior, Arcticfire, and soon was given Timberpaw as an apprentice. Arcticfire figured that her leader had only given her an apprentice in hopes that she would bound with him as a friend.
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Post by me on Aug 21, 2009 17:01:39 GMT -5
There's only one problem with this that I could see. ThornClan cats cannot have long hair -- please read the thread Clan Differences, under the sub-board Clan History, under the board Database.
Otherwise great.
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Winterfrost
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Post by Winterfrost on Aug 21, 2009 17:28:45 GMT -5
There, fixed it. ^^ She is now short-haired. And the picture makes her look chubby. xD
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Post by me on Aug 21, 2009 18:35:41 GMT -5
xD Accepted.
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