Timberpaw
Apprentice
these places and these faces are getting old, so i'm going home;;
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Wolfpaw
Aug 20, 2009 14:36:45 GMT -5
Post by Timberpaw on Aug 20, 2009 14:36:45 GMT -5
Name and previous names: Wolfkit, Wolfpaw, (Wolfsong)
Gender: Male
Clan: ThornClan
Ranking: Medicine Cat apprentice is the position is still open. If not, regular apprentice.
Age in moons: 10 moons
Physical description: Wolfpaw is a silvery-grey tabby tom with icy, piercing blue orbs. His fur is fairly short, with a few dark, small, black spots that dot his fur. He has a thin tail, and is used to slipping under the brambles of his Clan. His fur color reminds most of a wolf, which is why he got his name; Wolfpaw.
Mental description: Wolfpaw is kind, loving, and caring, and hopes to be a medicine cat one day, and the best. He wants to care for the wounded, and all of the sick. Although battling marveled him, he strayed too far from it, and into the den of medicine. He hopes that he is chosen one day to be a healing apprentice. Warm-hearted, humorous, loving, compassion-full is what he is.
Personal history: Wolfpaw was born in ThornClan, where he soon wandered around to the medicine cat den. He was fascinated by it, awed him in some way. Running back to his now decreased den mates- Vixenkit, Mountainkit, Blazekit- they played a few kit-games and had tons of fun. His sister and brother, Vixenkit and Blazekit, died from a fox. While Mountainkit was roaming around in the protected camp, a hawk soared down, and grabbed the small tabby kit and carried him off. Left alone, Wolfpaw was determined to revenge the death of his siblings.
Places role-played in: N/A
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Wolfpaw
Aug 20, 2009 16:04:24 GMT -5
Post by me on Aug 20, 2009 16:04:24 GMT -5
Good for the most part, although there are a few mistakes... Mountainpaw could not have been a black cat, ThornClan doesn't have black cats. Also Wolfpaw cannot have long fur, for the same reason. Aside from that...
Excellent bio ^^, and yes, you can have the medicine cat apprentice position! It'll be nice to have another ThornClan apprentice for Singedpaw to play with.
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Wolfpaw
Aug 20, 2009 16:16:58 GMT -5
Post by me on Aug 20, 2009 16:16:58 GMT -5
That looks good now =) I just spotted something else though. When you said this: "Wolfpaw was determined to advantage the death of his siblings." You meant revenge, not advantage, right?
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Wolfpaw
Aug 20, 2009 16:28:17 GMT -5
Post by me on Aug 20, 2009 16:28:17 GMT -5
Accepted!
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